LO2: Narrative change

Changing our narrative

We have decided to adapt our narrative as the narrative that we have produced so far doesn't all make sense making the narrative seem less realistic to the audience. This is because the idea of the prize money from the local newspaper doesn't create verisimilitude.

We have developed the idea to make the film more convincing, we have slightly changed the narrative as the abandoned house is now found by the students while they are walking home, this is more realistic as they go in to the house to clarify the rumors that they have found on the internet. The camera work is mainly filmed by the characters, this will give the filming a natural effect to create social realism.