LO1: Tutor feedback

Feed Forward Sheet:

LO4: Film Trailer DRAFT 8

 

What went well:
We have edited the begining of our trailer even more to add more clips at the beginning of our trailer this is to lengthen our traile and also this is so the trailer starts with footage straight away for any titles are shown.

What we could improve: 
We still need to improve the beginning of our trailer as we need to make make the footage fit with the sound of the heartbeat.

How to improve:
I will make these improvements by concentrating on adding footage before the production company title.

LO4: Rob Speranza Feedback

Rob Speranza is a producer and production manager, known for Entity (2012), Inbred (2011) and Small Creatures (2010). He works for the South Yorkshire film network. Came in to talk to us about film and we showed him out film trailer so far.

Feedback we received:
_The sound was very good and effective
-The timing of the film trailer was a good length

However for improvement he mentioned for the future, if we want the film trailer to aim at a older age range, we need older actors, otherwise it looks like a student film and wouldn't really appeal to a older age range.

LO4: Tutor Feedback

Improvements:
-We need to add a photo of me as a child, this is is to go with the script as "When I was little" is read.-
-We also need to add a fade on the audio of the title graphics, this is so the audio doesnt come to a sudden end.
-We need to add more clips in before the title graphics "This October" as there is too much of a long wait.
-Too many fades at the beginning of the trailer.

We are going to work on all the improvements and take all the feed back on board.

LO4: Film Trailer DRAFT 7

What went well:
We have add more clips at the beginning of our trailer this is to lengthen our traile and also this is so the trailer starts with footage straight away for any titles are shown.

What we could improve: 
We still need to improve the beginning of our trailer as we need to make make the footage fit with the sound of the heartbeat.

How to improve:
I will make these improvements by concentrating on adding footage before the production company title.

LO4: Lesson Objective

In today's Lesson I will be..
Continue to make the film trailer longer by spacing out our clips.

LO4: Lesson Objective

In today's Lesson we will be following our plan which we have made to make the film trailer longer.
In todays lesson we we also be deleting the first scene in the house.

LO4: Photoshop Experimenting

This is a screen recording of us trying out different filters to make a more of a night time effect so that this scene fits in with the settings of the rest of our film trailer.

LO2: Production Schedule week 11